War+with+Grandpa

I think that the most important thing that Peter learned is that you should never fight with your relative(s) because it really won't get you anywhere. Think about it. Say you have a brother; if you and your brother start fighting, then your relationship with your brother won't get any better. It will only stay the same or get worst. There's no point in doing it. I also think that you should at least conference with who ever is watching you at the household to to talk about how you feel about the situation.

I think that the most important thing that Grandpa learned is that you should ask someone if you can use or stay in anything of theirs instead of just going ahead with it without their permission. It woul dn't be right. For example: Say you become Peter. You wouldn't like it if someone just came in your room and told you to get out. It wouldn't be fair. And the same thing I said about Peter; fighting won't get you anywhere but back at the same point that you are at now or worst.

I think that Grandpa caused the war between him and Peter. He basically came in Peter's room and took it over with out asking Peter. This caused Peter to get upset and do something worst than what grandpa had done to him. As a result, they went back and forth blasting their ideas at each other and not really getting anywhere. Probably if Grandpa had asked Peter if he could stay in his room, the war probably wouldn't have happen.


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